Carpe Diem's Tan Renga Challenge #7
For the Tan Renga challenge, we are to take this haiku, penned by Kristjaan Panneman, internationally known haikuist and founder of the Carpe Diem website, and add two seven syllable lines:
decomposed flowers
silent witness of a relative
red tear-stained eyes
silent witness of a relative
red tear-stained eyes
My inspired lines:
how the withered rose petals
still keep her memory near
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that is beautiful... and full of love.. :-)
ReplyDeleteSomething so very special about roses:)
ReplyDeleteWhat a wonderfully and lovely completion of the Tan Renga Maggie. It feels great to see how you're growing in the art of haiku writing. I am so glad that you like haiku writing so much. Thank you for your kind introduction.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Kristjaan. Still have a long way to go.
DeleteLove your added lines...marvelous ending.
ReplyDeletePeace
Siggi
Very poignant completion! :)
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