Saturday, July 20, 2013

HH: Time & Timeless

Haiku Heights #226   ~ Time



time is on our side ~
whoever uttered those words
did not know of us

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a year of our lives
me with my thin band of gold
secure in our love

 

14 comments:

  1. very tender, very sweet. well done, friend.

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  2. Nice take on the prompt..
    Peace
    Siggi

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  3. Nice feeling of security and may it be forever!!

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  4. That speaks of strength ...tender, sentimental,..yet hard and determined. Very well done, Maggie.

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  5. The second one so beautiful! Congrats =) The first one so true

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  6. Both haiku say some interesting things....I liked them..

    http://rameshsood.blogspot.in/2013/07/past-glows-in-now.html

    RS

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  7. the second sounds like a peaceful, tranquil love. Congrats.

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  8. First one is very true, Maggie, esp in today's fast-paced world. Love the tenderness in the second Haiku :)

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  9. so much truth in the first and beautiful sentiment on the second

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  10. Thanks to all for reading and commenting. Yes, it's been my first anniversary for 18 minutes now :) Reading sparingly due to headaches. Was able to comment a bit today on some prompts. Hopefully Haiku Heights tomorrow.

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  11. The first one is so powerful

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  12. Ah may your thin band of gold keep you safely together for many years to come x Lovely haiku x

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  13. The first is profound, the second tender and sweet.

    Sleeping the Night

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