i like that last line...so tactile...etch is a cool word too. told bjorn the other day, never been much for haiku, but i am learning by reading...smiles.
Thank you, Brian! So nice of you to visit. I have so much to read for three challenges. Your time and visits so much appreciated. I am in awe of really good haiku. Glad you are developing a taste for it. Bjorn's is much better. Etch came up in about my 5th rework of the last line. :)
Thank you, Kir, grapeling, gayathree and Claudia for your lovely comments! I will slowly be working through reading all of your challenge entries in the next few days. Please be patient with me.
i like that last line...so tactile...etch is a cool word too. told bjorn the other day, never been much for haiku, but i am learning by reading...smiles.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Brian! So nice of you to visit. I have so much to read for three challenges. Your time and visits so much appreciated. I am in awe of really good haiku. Glad you are developing a taste for it. Bjorn's is much better. Etch came up in about my 5th rework of the last line. :)
Deletei think good haikus are really difficult to write because of your brevity....each words count...you did well with yours and i like etch as well
ReplyDeletesmiles, Maggie - irony without being self-deprecating. ~ M
ReplyDeleteHaiku is always a form of poetry that I am in love with. And your's is no exception. The challenge taken up has been well-served. :)
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this was romantic, sexy, pleading and I loved every word, every syllable beat of it.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Kir, grapeling, gayathree and Claudia for your lovely comments! I will slowly be working through reading all of your challenge entries in the next few days. Please be patient with me.
ReplyDeleteetch them into my soul ~ lovely haiku and so creative with 'sacred ordinary words' ~ Happy Day!
ReplyDeleteThanks for 'visiting'.
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ReplyDeleteA beautiful haiku for the heart.
ReplyDeleteThe beauty of haiku! Wonderful write Maggie!
ReplyDeleteHank
lovely words...nice lines!
ReplyDeleteLovely tribute to these sweet small words.
ReplyDeleteHappy Friday !
Your poem describes what we do everyday when we write our haiku and then share it with one another! Happy Friday to you, Maggie!
ReplyDeleteEtched words don't disappear easily!
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Thanks to all for visiting and leaving happy comments. So nice to read after being away a bit. Happy weekend, everyone!
ReplyDeleteand why not; you deserve a beautiful haiku written to you; have a good weekend
ReplyDeletemuch love...
you sound in touch with your soul!
ReplyDeleteSpent a long time soul searching. I think I found it ;-)
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so!
Aw, thanks, rebecca. Made me smile at the end of a long day ♥
DeleteEase away. Beautiful in every simple elegant word.
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