Easing my way back into writing with mindfulness, introspection, and writing challenges.
i like that last line...so tactile...etch is a cool word too. told bjorn the other day, never been much for haiku, but i am learning by reading...smiles.
Thank you, Brian! So nice of you to visit. I have so much to read for three challenges. Your time and visits so much appreciated. I am in awe of really good haiku. Glad you are developing a taste for it. Bjorn's is much better. Etch came up in about my 5th rework of the last line. :)
i think good haikus are really difficult to write because of your brevity....each words count...you did well with yours and i like etch as well
smiles, Maggie - irony without being self-deprecating. ~ M
Haiku is always a form of poetry that I am in love with. And your's is no exception. The challenge taken up has been well-served. :)www.gayathreeganesan.blogspot.in/search/label/Poems
this was romantic, sexy, pleading and I loved every word, every syllable beat of it.
Thank you, Kir, grapeling, gayathree and Claudia for your lovely comments! I will slowly be working through reading all of your challenge entries in the next few days. Please be patient with me.
etch them into my soul ~ lovely haiku and so creative with 'sacred ordinary words' ~ Happy Day!Thanks for 'visiting'.
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A beautiful haiku for the heart.
The beauty of haiku! Wonderful write Maggie!Hank
lovely words...nice lines!
Lovely tribute to these sweet small words.Happy Friday !
Your poem describes what we do everyday when we write our haiku and then share it with one another! Happy Friday to you, Maggie!
Etched words don't disappear easily!Ragged Things
Thanks to all for visiting and leaving happy comments. So nice to read after being away a bit. Happy weekend, everyone!
and why not; you deserve a beautiful haiku written to you; have a good weekend much love...
you sound in touch with your soul!
Spent a long time soul searching. I think I found it ;-)
Aw, thanks, rebecca. Made me smile at the end of a long day ♥
Ease away. Beautiful in every simple elegant word.Peace