Friday, July 5, 2013

HH: In The Breeze

Haiku Heights #262 ~ Sand



sand within my palm
watching it drift in the breeze
as his ashes did



17 comments:

  1. Oh this is a touching haiku. Are you going to link it to Haiku My heart?

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    1. Thank you, gma. I did another one for Haiku My Heart.

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  2. I little wistful gem. Great imagery.

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  3. Oh..sad but such a beautiful piece...lovely

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  4. Oh Maggie this is so touching, so beautiful, and so sad

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  5. Very intimate! Brings out the transitory nature of things very well.

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  6. Aww! This is such a beautiful (yet sad) haiku!

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  7. Thank you, everyone for reading and commenting. I know, I do sad well. lol. You are all so appreciated. Will be dealing with eye issues for a bit. Less time for reading and comments :(

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  8. Nice touch of melancholy - well done!

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  9. This evokes such feelings of loneliness in me! Sand

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  10. Lovely...I never thought of this take on the prompt.
    Sad, and soulful.
    Peace
    Siggi

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  11. Ah this is so poignant x I love it x

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