Easing my way back into writing with mindfulness, introspection, and writing challenges.
Oh this is a touching haiku. Are you going to link it to Haiku My heart?
Thank you, gma. I did another one for Haiku My Heart.
I little wistful gem. Great imagery.
Ow, touching words
Oh..sad but such a beautiful piece...lovely
Oh Maggie this is so touching, so beautiful, and so sad
Very intimate! Brings out the transitory nature of things very well.
Aww! This is such a beautiful (yet sad) haiku!
Thank you, everyone for reading and commenting. I know, I do sad well. lol. You are all so appreciated. Will be dealing with eye issues for a bit. Less time for reading and comments :(
Nice touch of melancholy - well done!
Lovely and so very sad.
This evokes such feelings of loneliness in me! Sand
Lovely...I never thought of this take on the prompt.Sad, and soulful.PeaceSiggi
Ah this is so poignant x I love it x