Easing my way back into writing with mindfulness, introspection, and writing challenges.
This is a sad situation, Maggie. I think you have accuratly portrayed a fairly common situation. More likely more bad man vs. nice woman.It reminded me of a novel, Drood, written by Dan Simmons. It is his version of what Charles Dicken's unfinished novel, Drood, would tell. A major part of it was when an evil man was introduced who could control ones mind. He actually placed an evil weavil like bug into the person's brain...
Thank you for visiting. The plot of Drood is a good metaphor of what was done to me by the man posing as my father...sadly. Glad its behind me but still comes out in my writing.
Every word carefully chosen, as it should be with poetry. I liked it.
A sombre poem. Hope it was just a writing exercise!
I like the fact that evil is powerless. Nice.Dropping by from OSIhttp://ilasoulpoems.blogspot.co.nz/