dVerse: Water, Water
an ocean of memories
flow from my mind
to be released to sea
to float away where they
can no longer reach my shores
far from where they drift
diving into the water blue
alone and silent with liquid nature
my senses drink in all that is pure
and cleanse my soul
Great flow here -- one feels a wash of good stuff and wonderful that you can focus on those bits. This is Karin btw, http://Manicddaily.wordpress.com
ReplyDeletenice....similar a bit to the previous haiku...interesting the memories floating away to no longer reach your shore...the releasing, the letting go....it can def be cleansing....
ReplyDeleteFeels like release into now without weight of yesterday... Love ya
ReplyDeleteWater does purify and cleanse the soul ~ Good to see you ~
ReplyDeleteI feel your refreshment.
ReplyDeleteSpiritual and emotional...
ReplyDeleteWe are mostly water, with sentient energy flows holding the husk together; and one of the highest accolades we can garner, is when we siphon off some cortical flow, and transfer it into poetry; thanks.
ReplyDeleteIt is good when an ocean of memories is able to flow, I think, instead of being STUCK and immoveable...which I think is headache producing rather than freeing. I enjoyed your perspective.
ReplyDeleteI love this, memories flow to the sea, where they mix, perhaps we drink them again some day
ReplyDeleteto float away where they can no longer reach my shores - such great lines! really liked this - K
ReplyDeletethis speaks to me of letting go...the things that float with the river and we dive into peaceful places...nice
ReplyDeletegreat images of cleansing and purity. Alway love your stuff MG.
ReplyDeleteI agree, water is so cleansing, both for the body and sould. Nice read~ Jason
ReplyDeleteletting go of memories is much tougher than the act itself! lovely
ReplyDeleteMemories cast aside to the ocean depths - symbolic piece Maggie.
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