Saturday, July 27, 2013

dVerse: Far From My Shores

dVerse: Water, Water



an ocean of memories
flow from my mind
to be released to sea
to float away where they
can no longer reach my shores

far from where they drift
diving into the water blue
alone and silent with liquid nature
my senses drink in all that is pure
and cleanse my soul


15 comments:

  1. Great flow here -- one feels a wash of good stuff and wonderful that you can focus on those bits. This is Karin btw, http://Manicddaily.wordpress.com

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  2. nice....similar a bit to the previous haiku...interesting the memories floating away to no longer reach your shore...the releasing, the letting go....it can def be cleansing....

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  3. Feels like release into now without weight of yesterday... Love ya

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  4. Water does purify and cleanse the soul ~ Good to see you ~

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  5. Spiritual and emotional...

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  6. We are mostly water, with sentient energy flows holding the husk together; and one of the highest accolades we can garner, is when we siphon off some cortical flow, and transfer it into poetry; thanks.

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  7. It is good when an ocean of memories is able to flow, I think, instead of being STUCK and immoveable...which I think is headache producing rather than freeing. I enjoyed your perspective.

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  8. I love this, memories flow to the sea, where they mix, perhaps we drink them again some day

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  9. to float away where they can no longer reach my shores - such great lines! really liked this - K

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  10. this speaks to me of letting go...the things that float with the river and we dive into peaceful places...nice

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  11. great images of cleansing and purity. Alway love your stuff MG.

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  12. I agree, water is so cleansing, both for the body and sould. Nice read~ Jason

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  13. letting go of memories is much tougher than the act itself! lovely

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  14. Memories cast aside to the ocean depths - symbolic piece Maggie.

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