Carpe Diem ~ Little Ones #1
This is a new challenge to begin to learn shorter forms of haiku. A Pi-ku is 3-1-4 syllables, however, for fun, we are adding a few more numbers to Pi ~ 314159.
oppressive
heat
without relief
shrouds
mother nature 'til
she can no longer feed her hungry
Very nice 'longer'- Pi-ku Maggie, with a very strong message in it. Thank you for picking up this challenge.
ReplyDeleteI like how you took up the challenge and made it your own.
ReplyDeleteWell written and as Kris said, a very strong message.
Peace
Siggi