Thursday, July 25, 2013

CD: Oppressive Heat

Carpe Diem ~ Little Ones #1




This is a new challenge to begin to learn shorter forms of haiku. A Pi-ku is 3-1-4 syllables, however, for fun, we are adding a few more numbers to Pi ~ 314159.


oppressive
heat
without relief
shrouds 
mother nature 'til
she can no longer feed her hungry


2 comments:

  1. Very nice 'longer'- Pi-ku Maggie, with a very strong message in it. Thank you for picking up this challenge.

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  2. I like how you took up the challenge and made it your own.
    Well written and as Kris said, a very strong message.
    Peace
    Siggi

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