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Beautiful imagery...and so well composed!
Wonderful leap, Maggie
Thank you! Took me awhile to get the last line to where I liked it.
leaping hand in handacross the footpath puddlenext puddle beckons
That sounds like fun!
I like the narrative quality of you haiku. It make me wonder what happens next.landing she stumbleshe catches and steadies hernext they run and splash
Makes me want to put on my bright yellow galoshes!
I had to come back for a second visit to your blog. What fun!yellow rubber bootstoo many joyful splasheshe helps pour hers out
Yes, this turned into a fun puddle jumping haiku prompt commentary!
Love it...thank you..☺PeaceSiggi
delightful Haiku Maggie :) puddle jumping is fun but doing it together is absolute joy :)
Beautiful haiku. mud puddlehe keeps his promiseto catch her
I like your version. More romantic :)
A leap and stumbleFrom one puddle to the nextGoals in sight are metGallant strides together!!
I enjoyed this frivolity.
They leap togetherand land in the puddle;splash of love and joy.. http://rameshsood.blogspot.in/2013/06/horse-gives-lesson.html RS:)
Thank you all for this lovely and fun puddle jumping haiku sharing!
I like this ~ chivalry not needed when you work together ~ equally caring! Great x