tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7529664820669648146.post2947950984357355714..comments2023-09-28T03:24:44.018-04:00Comments on Falling Into Me: HH: Modern VersionMaggie Gracehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13044824920398442496noreply@blogger.comBlogger18125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7529664820669648146.post-55542462961603653222013-06-15T12:01:52.359-04:002013-06-15T12:01:52.359-04:00I like this ~ chivalry not needed when you work to...I like this ~ chivalry not needed when you work together ~ equally caring! Great xAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7529664820669648146.post-37449484069870832082013-06-13T14:37:50.962-04:002013-06-13T14:37:50.962-04:00Thank you all for this lovely and fun puddle jumpi...Thank you all for this lovely and fun puddle jumping haiku sharing!Maggie Gracehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13044824920398442496noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7529664820669648146.post-30988479044973231332013-06-13T14:37:03.506-04:002013-06-13T14:37:03.506-04:00Yes, this turned into a fun puddle jumping haiku p...Yes, this turned into a fun puddle jumping haiku prompt commentary!Maggie Gracehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13044824920398442496noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7529664820669648146.post-19261203028672400842013-06-13T13:25:22.084-04:002013-06-13T13:25:22.084-04:00I had to come back for a second visit to your blog...I had to come back for a second visit to your blog. What fun!<br /><br />yellow rubber boots<br />too many joyful splashes<br />he helps pour hers outAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7529664820669648146.post-9534056230389914962013-06-13T06:46:09.521-04:002013-06-13T06:46:09.521-04:00They leap together
and land in the puddle;
splash ...They leap together<br />and land in the puddle;<br />splash of love and joy.. <br /><br />http://rameshsood.blogspot.in/2013/06/horse-gives-lesson.html <br /><br />RS:)Ramesh Soodhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05589155663544312563noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7529664820669648146.post-19683469578558577942013-06-12T16:46:47.218-04:002013-06-12T16:46:47.218-04:00I enjoyed this frivolity.I enjoyed this frivolity.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7529664820669648146.post-86361738987972974882013-06-12T07:21:24.055-04:002013-06-12T07:21:24.055-04:00A leap and stumble
From one puddle to the next
Goa...A leap and stumble<br />From one puddle to the next<br />Goals in sight are met<br /><br />Gallant strides together!!Nankahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05428694673909046094noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7529664820669648146.post-77374080878861994582013-06-11T23:59:12.184-04:002013-06-11T23:59:12.184-04:00I like your version. More romantic :)I like your version. More romantic :)Maggie Gracehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13044824920398442496noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7529664820669648146.post-64192015143886501602013-06-11T23:25:23.654-04:002013-06-11T23:25:23.654-04:00Beautiful haiku.
mud puddle
he keeps his promis...Beautiful haiku. <br /><br /><br />mud puddle<br />he keeps his promise<br />to catch herLollyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16526692343815904632noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7529664820669648146.post-15877097639879554782013-06-11T21:13:15.892-04:002013-06-11T21:13:15.892-04:00delightful Haiku Maggie :) puddle jumping is fun b...delightful Haiku Maggie :) puddle jumping is fun but doing it together is absolute joy :)Reshmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01640435257765195374noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7529664820669648146.post-28554745404732424272013-06-11T14:57:24.826-04:002013-06-11T14:57:24.826-04:00Love it...thank you..☺
Peace
SiggiLove it...thank you..☺<br />Peace<br />SiggiSiggi in Downeast Mainehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12977578917775406831noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7529664820669648146.post-34897097141444840182013-06-11T14:24:59.885-04:002013-06-11T14:24:59.885-04:00Makes me want to put on my bright yellow galoshes!...Makes me want to put on my bright yellow galoshes!Maggie Gracehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13044824920398442496noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7529664820669648146.post-40875119748387305092013-06-11T14:24:32.193-04:002013-06-11T14:24:32.193-04:00That sounds like fun!That sounds like fun!Maggie Gracehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13044824920398442496noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7529664820669648146.post-8550584227603496322013-06-11T14:24:14.161-04:002013-06-11T14:24:14.161-04:00Thank you! Took me awhile to get the last line to ...Thank you! Took me awhile to get the last line to where I liked it.Maggie Gracehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13044824920398442496noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7529664820669648146.post-80462746327748603462013-06-11T13:48:07.466-04:002013-06-11T13:48:07.466-04:00I like the narrative quality of you haiku. It make...I like the narrative quality of you haiku. It make me wonder what happens next.<br /><br />landing she stumbles<br />he catches and steadies her<br />next they run and splashAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7529664820669648146.post-90532923872453144972013-06-11T13:45:48.196-04:002013-06-11T13:45:48.196-04:00leaping hand in hand
across the footpath puddle
ne...leaping hand in hand<br />across the footpath puddle<br />next puddle beckonsAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7529664820669648146.post-36696747559555018082013-06-11T13:45:00.168-04:002013-06-11T13:45:00.168-04:00Wonderful leap, Maggie Wonderful leap, Maggie Reading Pleasurehttp://readinpleasure.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7529664820669648146.post-89271644927037667152013-06-11T13:33:05.589-04:002013-06-11T13:33:05.589-04:00Beautiful imagery...and so well composed!Beautiful imagery...and so well composed!Panchalihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08832164041967778122noreply@blogger.com