Awesome haiku Maggie ... you have chosen a nice way to use coolness in your haiku and together with the Tea, as I did myself in my post. Beautifully composed.
Thank you! I wanted tea by a waterfall but found the teahouse by the water which I have seen as part of an estate. So that inspired me. I loved your haiku about having tea in the heat.
Beautiful.. I loved it. :)
ReplyDeleteAwesome haiku Maggie ... you have chosen a nice way to use coolness in your haiku and together with the Tea, as I did myself in my post.
ReplyDeleteBeautifully composed.
Thank you! I wanted tea by a waterfall but found the teahouse by the water which I have seen as part of an estate. So that inspired me. I loved your haiku about having tea in the heat.
DeleteYou have created an exquisite scene with a handful of words! Lovely!
ReplyDeleteYour words invite a reader in to enjoy a cup of tea in the cool shade!Cool
ReplyDeleteWow, thank you for the lovely comments on my teahouse!
ReplyDeletewell here's another compliment
ReplyDeletethis is really good
Cheers!
JzB
:)) Thank you, JzB!
DeleteVery well done Grace, I can feel the cool shade and relaxing Koi :)
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Koi not relaxing. They swimming. But relaxing to watch ;-O Thank you for lovely compliment!
Deletecooling words and image - nicely done
ReplyDeleteJust beautiful! Great pairing of the photo and haiku too.
ReplyDeleteHubby and I were married in Japanese garden by koi pond. No teahouse though. Thank you, Lolly!
ReplyDeleteThank you, Leslie and Poet. Teahouse so serene. Wish I had one...and koi pond...and Japanese garden. Need to win lottery.
ReplyDeleteLovely with koi and teahouse... couldn't be any better...
ReplyDelete:)) I'd be wanting raspberry iced tea though.
DeleteI like the way the word "tea" holds these words together like a neatly wrapped package.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Annie!
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