Monday, June 10, 2013

CD: Suzushi (cool, coolness)

Carpe Diem #218



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teahouse in the shade
coolness of koi pond wafts through
tranquil time for tea



19 comments:

  1. Beautiful.. I loved it. :)

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  2. Awesome haiku Maggie ... you have chosen a nice way to use coolness in your haiku and together with the Tea, as I did myself in my post.
    Beautifully composed.

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    1. Thank you! I wanted tea by a waterfall but found the teahouse by the water which I have seen as part of an estate. So that inspired me. I loved your haiku about having tea in the heat.

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  3. You have created an exquisite scene with a handful of words! Lovely!

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  4. Your words invite a reader in to enjoy a cup of tea in the cool shade!Cool

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  5. Wow, thank you for the lovely comments on my teahouse!

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  6. well here's another compliment

    this is really good

    Cheers!
    JzB

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  7. super lovely. Koi! Yes!

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    1. Hubby and I were married in Japanese garden by koi pond. No teahouse though. Thank you, Lolly!

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  8. Very well done Grace, I can feel the cool shade and relaxing Koi :)

    the weary swagman

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    1. Koi not relaxing. They swimming. But relaxing to watch ;-O Thank you for lovely compliment!

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  9. cooling words and image - nicely done

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  10. Just beautiful! Great pairing of the photo and haiku too.

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  11. Thank you, Leslie and Poet. Teahouse so serene. Wish I had one...and koi pond...and Japanese garden. Need to win lottery.

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  12. Lovely with koi and teahouse... couldn't be any better...

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    1. :)) I'd be wanting raspberry iced tea though.

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  13. I like the way the word "tea" holds these words together like a neatly wrapped package.

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