Thursday, June 27, 2013

CD: Kikusha-Ni's "The Dusk in Rain"

Carpe Diem #44



Compose a haiku with same feeling and tone as this haiku:

my body all alone
in this autumn I feel -
the dusk in rain

(c) Kikusha-Ni

My inspired haiku:

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this dusky rain
my only companion ~
long lonely night 


17 comments:

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    1. Thank you for such a lovely comment!

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  2. That is vert nice and very clever

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    1. Thank you, Pirate! Not sure about the "clever" part though. Or at least wasn't trying to be clever.

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  3. Melancholy and very lovely.

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  4. Thank you, Steph, Lolly, and JJoy!

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  5. Melancholy in a nutshell, what a wonderful haiku Maggie. Chapeau!

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  6. the lonely nights do seem longer....

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  7. Thank you all for the lovely comments. I thought last night, long after writing this, that I think one of the haiku of the masters uses the line "my only companion" with a flower. Wasn't intentional. Will search and see if I can find it. I know Kristjaan posted the flower haiku.

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  8. That is a lonely night indeed Maggie

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  9. Forlorn is the word that comes to mind. Beautiful, Maggie.

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  10. Beautiful, Maggie. The mood is very strong.

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  11. A lonely night very well supported with a fitting pic. Beautiful take Maggie!

    Hank

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  12. I think forlorn summarizes it greatly... (and being late this is the WOTD at artwiculate)..

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