Thursday, June 27, 2013

CD: Kikusha-Ni's "The Dusk in Rain"

Carpe Diem #44



Compose a haiku with same feeling and tone as this haiku:

my body all alone
in this autumn I feel -
the dusk in rain

(c) Kikusha-Ni

My inspired haiku:

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this dusky rain
my only companion ~
long lonely night 


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17 comments:

  1. Magical Mystical Teacher6/27/2013 6:29 PM

    Truly in the spirit of Kikusha-Ni!

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  2. Pirate6/27/2013 6:48 PM

    That is vert nice and very clever

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    1. Maggie Grace6/27/2013 7:36 PM

      Thank you, Pirate! Not sure about the "clever" part though. Or at least wasn't trying to be clever.

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  3. steph6/27/2013 8:15 PM

    Melancholy and very lovely.

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  4. Lolly6/27/2013 9:26 PM

    niiice one :)

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  5. Anonymous6/27/2013 10:04 PM

    Lonely and lovely.

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  6. Maggie Grace6/27/2013 11:14 PM

    Thank you, Steph, Lolly, and JJoy!

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  7. Chèvrefeuille6/28/2013 4:16 AM

    Melancholy in a nutshell, what a wonderful haiku Maggie. Chapeau!

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  8. Reading Pleasure6/28/2013 7:51 AM

    Powerfully lonely

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  9. joanne6/28/2013 1:32 PM

    the lonely nights do seem longer....

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  10. Maggie Grace6/28/2013 2:23 PM

    Thank you all for the lovely comments. I thought last night, long after writing this, that I think one of the haiku of the masters uses the line "my only companion" with a flower. Wasn't intentional. Will search and see if I can find it. I know Kristjaan posted the flower haiku.

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  11. moondustwriter6/28/2013 4:05 PM

    That is a lonely night indeed Maggie

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  12. Sara McNulty6/28/2013 11:27 PM

    Forlorn is the word that comes to mind. Beautiful, Maggie.

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  13. Ese6/29/2013 12:06 AM

    Beautiful, Maggie. The mood is very strong.

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  14. kaykuala6/29/2013 3:28 AM

    A lonely night very well supported with a fitting pic. Beautiful take Maggie!

    Hank

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  15. brudberg7/02/2013 9:55 AM

    I think forlorn summarizes it greatly... (and being late this is the WOTD at artwiculate)..

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