Carpe Diem's Tan Renga Challenge #2
Add two seven-syllable lines to the following 5-7-5 haiku penned by Kristjaan Panneman who is the internationally published haikuist leading the Carpe Diem daily meme:
in the old barn
behind the straw bales
a secret meeting
behind the straw bales
a secret meeting
my two added lines:
giggles and rustling from hay
forbidden tryst unheeded
Nothing like a secret and forbidden. :)
ReplyDeleteNot my best two lines but thanks for reading and commenting, Susie!
DeleteNothing mysterious to this secret meeting.
ReplyDeletelol...the barn just didn't inspire me but I tried.
DeleteI love the two lines you added.
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