Sunday, June 16, 2013

CD: "A Secret Meeting"

Carpe Diem's Tan Renga Challenge #2



Add two seven-syllable lines to the following 5-7-5 haiku penned by Kristjaan Panneman who is the internationally published haikuist leading the Carpe Diem daily meme:


in the old barn
behind the straw bales
a secret meeting

my two added lines: 

giggles and rustling from hay
forbidden tryst unheeded


 

5 comments:

  1. Nothing like a secret and forbidden. :)

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    1. Not my best two lines but thanks for reading and commenting, Susie!

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  2. Nothing mysterious to this secret meeting.

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    1. lol...the barn just didn't inspire me but I tried.

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  3. I love the two lines you added.

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