Monday, June 10, 2013

CD: Kikusha-Ni's 'lost in the woods'

Carpe Diem Special #41



Write a haiku in the same sense, tone and Spirit as the one by Kikusha-Ni:

lost in the woods
only the sound of a leaf 
falling on my hat


My attempt to write a haiku in similar fashion: 

trees surround me
wind rustles through leaves
alone with nature

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12 comments:

  1. That is rich in imagery.. Good job! :)

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  2. To be surrounded by trees is to be surrounded by serenity--unless, of course, you're terrified of trees! :)

    Sombrero

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  3. very nice
    melange of zen
    and druid

    Cheers!
    JzB

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    1. druid? lol. Running thru forest nekked? ;-O

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  4. Thanks to all for commments. Still behind. Life interfering with haiku and comments!

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  5. A wonderful serene haiku ... time to think over and over all the things happening.

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    1. Definitely have had a reflective time since my trip. Being in those woods looks lovely. Thank you, Kristjaan.

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  6. I agree with you, I didn't focus on the lost part but more the serene .. I like that

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