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ah, reminds me of a nice hill station. Nice one.
I understand the crescendo is deafening...thank you...nice post.PeaceSiggi
I didn't have enough syllables for cacophonous orchestra. ;-O
Lovely! In small numbers they are quite charming :)
am thinking i should have used song birds. cicadas not so charming. but sounded good in first line. lol
I revised the haiku to reflect the true nature of cicadas. Thanks for the fun feedback to get me to rework it!
A triolet for the Cicadas choir!! :) I hear the noisy locust When Autumn days are hereAnd I cannot be focussedI hear the noisy locustAll through the month of AugustStripping fields across the weirI hear the noisy locust When Autumn days are here:D
:)) Nice!
Very enchanting. Imagery is fabulous.
Nice read :)
Cicadas create quite a raucous symphony on the summer air! Lovely!
wonderful choir indeed. Beautifully done, Maggie Grace :-)
Beyond rauchous!
I know this sound so well:) But they have not sung yet this summer.
Sometimes the choir does get on your nerves a la cacophony but for most part it is a symphony...Beautiful haiku Maggie :)
Your haiku reminds me of when I was a kid. I enjoyed listening to the cicadas. Haven't hear their sound in a long time. Great haiku! :)
Nice haiku! i think I just might be jealous though. I live where we are supposed to get the 17 year cicadas .. I haven't really heard them though.
bold crescendocacophonous orchestraplays bug symphonyCheers!JzB
I play the bug symphony by doing the flamenco on them ;-O
It is raucous when the screaming starts! Nicely Maggie!Hank
Thank you to all for your comments! Am behind on responding. Appreciate all of your visits!
I love falling to sleep to the 'cacophony' .... the image you chose shows nature's paintbrush..
Great description... I guess you learn to hate them....
Raucous indeed! (But I really like them!)
A wonderful haiku Maggie. BTW it doesn't matter that you have used a haiku which you shared also on Haiku Heights, thank you for participating.
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ah, reminds me of a nice hill station. Nice one.
ReplyDeleteI understand the crescendo is deafening...thank you...nice post.
ReplyDeletePeace
Siggi
I didn't have enough syllables for cacophonous orchestra. ;-O
ReplyDeleteLovely! In small numbers they are quite charming :)
ReplyDeleteam thinking i should have used song birds. cicadas not so charming. but sounded good in first line. lol
DeleteI revised the haiku to reflect the true nature of cicadas. Thanks for the fun feedback to get me to rework it!
ReplyDeleteA triolet for the Cicadas choir!! :)
ReplyDeleteI hear the noisy locust
When Autumn days are here
And I cannot be focussed
I hear the noisy locust
All through the month of August
Stripping fields across the weir
I hear the noisy locust
When Autumn days are here
:D
:)) Nice!
DeleteVery enchanting. Imagery is fabulous.
ReplyDeleteNice read :)
ReplyDeleteCicadas create quite a raucous symphony on the summer air! Lovely!
ReplyDeletewonderful choir indeed. Beautifully done, Maggie Grace :-)
ReplyDeleteBeyond rauchous!
ReplyDeleteI know this sound so well:) But they have not sung yet this summer.
ReplyDeleteSometimes the choir does get on your nerves a la cacophony but for most part it is a symphony...Beautiful haiku Maggie :)
ReplyDeleteYour haiku reminds me of when I was a kid. I enjoyed listening to the cicadas. Haven't hear their sound in a long time. Great haiku! :)
ReplyDeleteNice haiku! i think I just might be jealous though. I live where we are supposed to get the 17 year cicadas .. I haven't really heard them though.
ReplyDeletebold crescendo
ReplyDeletecacophonous orchestra
plays bug symphony
Cheers!
JzB
I play the bug symphony by doing the flamenco on them ;-O
ReplyDeleteIt is raucous when the screaming starts! Nicely Maggie!
ReplyDeleteHank
Thank you to all for your comments! Am behind on responding. Appreciate all of your visits!
ReplyDeleteI love falling to sleep to the 'cacophony' .... the image you chose shows nature's paintbrush..
ReplyDeleteGreat description... I guess you learn to hate them....
ReplyDeleteRaucous indeed! (But I really like them!)
ReplyDeleteA wonderful haiku Maggie. BTW it doesn't matter that you have used a haiku which you shared also on Haiku Heights, thank you for participating.
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