Friday, June 28, 2013

CD: 'Deeper Darkness'

Carpe Diem's Tan Renga Challenge #4



The first three lines are Björn Rudberg's beautiful haiku. For this challenge, I am to write 2 more lines of 7 syllables each.

after fireworks
the silence is clearer
darkness is deeper


my attempt:

the only sound my breathing
my only light the moonbeams 


 

11 comments:

  1. Lovely Grace, BRavo :)

    Deeper Darkness

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  2. Really nice.

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  3. Wonderful - my only light the moonbeams.. so nice.

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  4. Nicely done Maggie ... with this stanza you have made a wonderful Tan Renga.

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  5. Ooh, thank you, everyone! I was even pleased with this one :)

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