Friday, June 28, 2013

CD: 'Deeper Darkness'

Carpe Diem's Tan Renga Challenge #4

The first three lines are Björn Rudberg's beautiful haiku. For this challenge, I am to write 2 more lines of 7 syllables each.

after fireworks
the silence is clearer
darkness is deeper

my attempt:

the only sound my breathing
my only light the moonbeams