Carpe Diem's Tan Renga Challenge #4
The first three lines are Björn Rudberg's beautiful haiku. For this challenge, I am to write 2 more lines of 7 syllables each.
after fireworks
the silence is clearer
darkness is deeper
my attempt:
the silence is clearer
darkness is deeper
my attempt:
the only sound my breathing
my only light the moonbeams
Perfect my dear
ReplyDeleteWonderful ;-)
ReplyDeleteLovely Grace, BRavo :)
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Niiice! x
ReplyDeleteReally nice.
ReplyDeletevery nice....
ReplyDeleteLovely!!
ReplyDeleteDeeper Darkness
Wonderful - my only light the moonbeams.. so nice.
ReplyDeleteNicely done Maggie ... with this stanza you have made a wonderful Tan Renga.
ReplyDeleteOoh, thank you, everyone! I was even pleased with this one :)
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