Thursday, June 27, 2013

FSF: Why Bother?

Five Sentence Fiction: View



Polyvore by Grace Beam


We're born and then we die. What's the point in living? At least that was her view of life. Why bother if it's all for naught anyway? Then she remembered the words she'd heard so long ago: "Don't check out five minutes before the miracle happens."

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8 comments:

  1. Anonymous6/28/2013 11:14 PM

    I like it; the reasoning's good, too.
    Scott
    Mine: http://kindredspirit23.wordpress.com/2013/06/28/fsf-five-sentence-fiction-62813-final-viewing/

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  2. Anonymous6/29/2013 7:47 AM

    I couldn't agree more. Nice!

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  3. Anonymous6/29/2013 1:57 PM

    Nicely done. I like the message in this.

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  4. K R Smith6/30/2013 9:26 AM

    So many ask these questions, and yet the mystery remains - which is part of what makes life so intriguing.

    Nice story!

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  5. allmylivesnow6/30/2013 1:25 PM

    The last sentence packs a powerful punch to the senses. I really like this one.

    Barbara @ www.allmylivesnow.com

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  6. Maggie Grace6/30/2013 2:54 PM

    Thank you, all, for reading and commenting. I often have to remind myself of that last sentence.

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  7. K. Alexander7/01/2013 8:57 AM

    I think we all need to remind ourselves of that, often. Nice story!

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  8. Unknown7/03/2013 4:04 PM

    A good reminder of what is to come shouldn't be missed and is worth sticking around for. From no hope and dispare to hope! A fantastic take. I love the pic too. x

    http://40somethingundomesticateddevil.blogspot.co.uk/2013/07/five-sentence-fiction-view-part-4-zoe.html

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