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stunning!
Thank you, Nonnie!
Excellent, you've captured the image so well :)
Perfect! :)
WOW! Maggie what a beauty.
Thank you. The photo said it all to me :)
Cascading blooms - what a beautiful way to conjure up a wedding bouquet - a symbol of purity!Deutzia
Do you suppose the world could be purified by adding just a little bit more Deutzia? :)Deutzia
Really lovely :)
speaks of puritysuch a beautiful promisebut is it a ruseCheers!JzB
A wonderful set of words, but it has been on my mind for the last day whether I should mention or not, and thought I might. It is a beautifuL haiku but - I always feel a touch uncomfortable with similes in a haiku. THIS IS REALLY BEAUTIFUL THOUGH.
Take out the word "like"?
For haiku purists, "like" is a no-no. In this particular haiku, you could substitute "this" for "like."
Thank you so much!
Love your take on the prompt...thank you,PeaceSiggi
stunning!
ReplyDeleteThank you, Nonnie!
DeleteExcellent, you've captured the image so well :)
ReplyDeletePerfect! :)
ReplyDeleteWOW! Maggie what a beauty.
ReplyDeleteThank you. The photo said it all to me :)
DeleteCascading blooms - what a beautiful way to conjure up a wedding bouquet - a symbol of purity!Deutzia
ReplyDeleteDo you suppose the world could be purified by adding just a little bit more Deutzia? :)
ReplyDeleteDeutzia
Really lovely :)
ReplyDeletespeaks of purity
ReplyDeletesuch a beautiful promise
but is it a ruse
Cheers!
JzB
A wonderful set of words, but it has been on my mind for the last day whether I should mention or not, and thought I might. It is a beautifuL haiku but - I always feel a touch uncomfortable with similes in a haiku. THIS IS REALLY BEAUTIFUL THOUGH.
ReplyDeleteTake out the word "like"?
DeleteFor haiku purists, "like" is a no-no. In this particular haiku, you could substitute "this" for "like."
ReplyDeleteThank you so much!
DeleteLove your take on the prompt...
ReplyDeletethank you,
Peace
Siggi