Friday, June 7, 2013

CD: U no Hana (Deutzia Flower)

Carpe Diem #216



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this bridal bouquet
cascading white fragile blooms
speaks of purity


15 comments:

  1. Excellent, you've captured the image so well :)

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    1. Thank you. The photo said it all to me :)

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  3. Cascading blooms - what a beautiful way to conjure up a wedding bouquet - a symbol of purity!Deutzia

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  4. Do you suppose the world could be purified by adding just a little bit more Deutzia? :)

    Deutzia

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  5. speaks of purity
    such a beautiful promise
    but is it a ruse

    Cheers!
    JzB

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  6. A wonderful set of words, but it has been on my mind for the last day whether I should mention or not, and thought I might. It is a beautifuL haiku but - I always feel a touch uncomfortable with similes in a haiku. THIS IS REALLY BEAUTIFUL THOUGH.

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  7. For haiku purists, "like" is a no-no. In this particular haiku, you could substitute "this" for "like."

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  8. Love your take on the prompt...
    thank you,
    Peace
    Siggi

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