Thursday, August 1, 2013

CD: JRB's "Inspiration Flows"

Carpe Diem's Tan Renga Challenge #8



The challenge is to use JRB's (John Belchamber) haiku and add two seven-syllable lines of our own. JRB's haiku is:

gently fluttering
on shimmering wings of blue
inspiration flows



My inspired completion:
dancing among fragrant blooms
leaving deep thoughts in its path 

 

5 comments:

  1. This is wonderful Maggie, leaving deep thoughts indeed.

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    1. Thank you, JRB. Means a lot coming from you!

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  2. A very spiritual completion of the Tan Renga ... very deep layered.

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  3. Very nice finish...an inspiration in itself.
    Peace
    Siggi

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  4. dancing and thoughts on the path...lovely Tan Renga ♥

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