Sunday, August 11, 2013

HH: Ocean Thoughts

Haiku Heights ~ Ocean




earthquake in ocean
creates tsunami of rage
take no prisoners

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walk along the shore
hand in hand into twilight
the years of our life


5 comments:

  1. Ocean is like the human mind, exhibiting a wide range of emotions...Nicely crafted Maggie :)

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  2. I love the contrast in the haiku, both are very powerful =)

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  3. A bit sad when the sea is furious and takes away a few prisoners!! The fishermen here perform some rituals before setting out on a voyage to appease the sea!!

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  4. Two very contrasting haiku..! good work :)

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