dVerse: Form for All ~ Mathematics
Today's challenge is to write a poem following one of the mathematical formulas. I'm attempting a triangle which follows the form of 1, 3, 6, 10. Here goes... (ellipsis)
love
double heart
we become when married
entwined souls, limbs, thoughts and dreams forever
forever dreams and thoughts, limbs, souls entwined
married ~ when become "we"
heart double
love
ha...a palindrome to boot...methinks.
Lovely, Maggie! Another circular triangle.
ReplyDeleteah i think you did do a palindrome...very cool...entwined poetics for an entwined union...when in marriage each becomes we...smiles.
ReplyDeleteVery nice, Maggie. Not only a "fib' but a palindrome too. Hard to accomplish, but you did it beautifully.
ReplyDeleteOh, this had to be tricky to do, but the result is wonderful.
ReplyDeleteVery clever, brilliantly composed Maggie. Well done!
ReplyDeleteAnna :o]
Ah we were indeed on similar thoughts here.. palindromes and triangular combined, Brilliantly executed
ReplyDeleteThank you so much, Bjorn! Must check...thought the triangle was not Fibinacci. Maybe the first three syllable count are the same. Anyway, means so much to me for you to say that.
DeleteNicely done! Love it!
ReplyDeleteNeat trick ~ Creative to combine palindrome as well ~ Love that "we" becoming ~
ReplyDeletewhat a delight
ReplyDeletebrilliant work about sparkling truth
Nicely done Maggie. This is not the Fibonacci, but the series of triangular numbers - 1, 3, 6, 10, 15 ...
ReplyDeleteAnd then, just in case the challenge wasn't enough, you go and make it into a palindrome as well!
And there is so much joy when each really becomes we ... but ti sure takes a lot of work to get there.
i like how you combined the forms together with the topic of you poem...the being entwined...two different things/beings becoming one... makes sense...smiles
ReplyDeleteVery clever Maggie, brought a smile.
ReplyDelete2 in 1 - great stuff!
ReplyDeleteA splendid write, clever, and sweet
ReplyDeletegreat writing.. I love palindrome poetry but I've never been good in doing so.. but loved your creation.
ReplyDeleteMaggie this is gorgeous, I can't even write a palindrome poem how you did both I am very very impressed!
ReplyDeleteThank you! Have been away a few days and my blog wasn't letting me reply to comments. I just wrote the triangle 1, 3, 6, etc. When I was done, I just tried reading it backwards cuz of having read Bjorn's. And it worked. I honestly didn't do any difficult work. Perhaps one of those subconscious magical things. lol. Thought it was kinda cool how the "when we become 'we'..." came out. Surprised myself.
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