Tuesday, April 30, 2013

Always Believe

A to Z


Always believe cherished dreams
even feeling grumpy
Hope is just knotted love
making nudges outward
pursuing quintessential release
Some think unknown visions
wax xerophytic...
yield Zen 
  
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19 comments:

  1. here's the keeper (for me, at least):
    "Hope is just knotted love
    making nudges outward."
    wow. excellent!

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  2. This is beautiful. One of my favorite phrases is "hope is just knotted love." What a wonderful alphabet piece!

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  3. Thank you, both! Had read the challenge and had played with it in my head. But this came out when I started typing. The inner writer, I guess.

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    1. Ditto. Beautiful and such a visual formed when I read "hope is just knotted love making nudges outward" What comes to mind is a knotty piece of driftwood, craggy, smooth, undaunted.

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  4. "Hope is just knotted love"

    I love this!!

    This strikes resonance for me now on the topic of meaning in dreams.

    Well done!!

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    1. Thank you, Hannah! Glad you had a connection to it :))

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  5. I agree with Marian, Susie, and Hannah about "hope is just knotted love" — and I also love the fact that it flowed out when you started typing. It's wonderful when that happens, isn't it?
    A fabulous write!
    K

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    1. Thank you, Kay! Yes, actually, if it doesn't flow I come back to it later. And I do love that it happens!

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  6. Nice piece of writing, Maggie.

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  7. Well done you!
    You created a genuine poem out of these alphabetical ingredients.
    Did you nip down to the beach this morning to write that ? :-)

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  8. Excellent. Reads very smoothly.

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  9. Hope of course cruises life! loved this piece

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  10. Thank you Aprille, Peggy, and Akila for visiting and commenting. Am glad you liked it!

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  11. This is pretty ... I am impressed ~ A to Z was a tough challenge.

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  12. Knotted love is really cool

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  13. I love hope is knotted love!!!
    Well done :D

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  14. : hope is just knotted love" how true.

    Really loved this piece.

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  15. I love the 'knotted love" but also commend you on your last three lines - you rocked the difficult letters at the end.. Yield Zen!!

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