Monday, April 22, 2013

Tsunami of Feelings

Haiku Heights (Tsunami)


your death left me with
a tsunami of feelings
relief amongst them

13 comments:

  1. Sometimes relief really is the appropriate response to a death. Sometimes.

    Tsunami of Graces

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  2. wow maggie that is beautiful

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    1. Thanks, Sam. Wasn't sure how this would set with others, but it's what came out with the prompt.

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  3. Indeed for loves that have passed!!

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  4. Your haiku has tremendous impact, amazing job =)

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  5. Death can at times bring relief... though we never admit it

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  6. Sometimes relief comes after a wave of despair. Well penned.

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  7. Excellent take. I know the tsunami of feelings.

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  8. Powerful haiku, well done. :)

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  9. Nicely done. I think such relief is normal, especially after a long illness. It's sad to think how guilty one can feel for experiencing such relief, though.

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  10. Am glad I didn't state my reason for relief because it allowed each of you to have its own meaning. Actually, guess that's what haiku is supposed to do. hmmm. Thank you all for visiting and taking the time to write such thoughtful comments.

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