Five Sentence Fiction (Edge)
Write a five sentence story based on the prompt word: Edge. |
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She came for their healing powers from the earth's energy.
This is where she would heal her weary, lifeless spirit.
With her guide for the day, she traveled to the overlook where her Reiki massage would begin.
Lying down on her back, with her eyes closed, breathing in the dry desert air, she heard the tingsha ring throughout her mind and body and echo into the canyon below.
Wow you really packed a ton of imagery in that few words girl!
ReplyDelete:) My first try had short sentences. Had to adapt quickly!
DeleteExcellent, Maggie!! Much enjoyed.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Evi ♥
DeleteYou must be in peace before you'll be able to find peace within yourself. You must be in a place which is TOTALLY devoid of any sort of distraction from the outside world. That is the reason a high place which fulfills this requirement has to be sort before the healing process can begin. Even a temple though highly religious will never fit this requirement.
ReplyDeleteWELL DONE
Thanks for your thoughtful and insightful comments, Robin. What you say is true. Wasn't able to put much background in what brought her to that place for healing. She was ready.
DeleteI wish I could be "she" in your story. Sounds divine. Well thought out.
ReplyDeleteMe too! On my bucket list. Thank you for reading and taking time to comment.
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