Carpe Diem #174 (Whisper)
winds whisper to me
of nature's truth and wisdom
where I find solace
where I find solace
is in nature's sweet gardens
where peace is whispered
where peace is whispered
I long to be listening
far from all the fear
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Very nice peaceful thoughts, each one. Am not convinced by cascading haiku, but each one here is powerful on it's own merit.
ReplyDeleteI find beginning a haiku with the last line of the previous brings its own set of thoughts. If I can read the last line and be inspired, I keep going. Thank you for your kind words :)
Deletevery nice cascade
ReplyDeleteCheers!
JzB
I agree with you Maggie, sometimes a Haiku just becomes a cascade of its own accord, just as puddles sometimes become lakes :)
ReplyDeletejrb, have you seen the puddles in my town? they're almost lakes, as you say ;)
DeleteSuch a soft poem to rest your head on.
ReplyDeletevery pretty.
ReplyDeletei love the serenity in this set :)
ReplyDeleteI like cascade form..I think haiku like this has a different term..not sure what it is ...anyway very nice!
ReplyDeleteMay all of us hear those whispers...
ReplyDeleteHummingbird Whisper
I like it
ReplyDeleteI like it so very much
I like it
Thank you for all your lovely comments! Another very nice prompt. I had one but I forgot it :(
ReplyDeleterustling leaves
ReplyDeletewhisper ancient wise words
into my ear
Beautiful, Kristjaan!
DeleteI too find peace in gardens--when I can find them!
ReplyDeleteWhispering Water
beautiful words, Maggie!
ReplyDeleteNice cascade!
ReplyDeleteI love the cascade, and as pirate says-- the individual haiku has to be able to stand by themselves.
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