Carpe Diem Special #31
wet leaves on the ground
reflecting fading sun
scent of autumn
wet leaves on the ground
remind me of splashing
puddles of childhood
reflecting fading sun
rain on road from storm
branches already blown bare
scent of autumn
season waning
colors changing
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Beautiful series of haiku Maggie. And I am glad to see that you have used the Troiku-form of haiku. Well done.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Kristjaan. Interesting form of writing. I like it. Would need more practice. Great prompt to try it on!
DeleteI want to try this form as well thanks for the lesson :)
DeleteYou painted a scene with words. Wonderful!
ReplyDeleteI never thought of the fading leaves as a "painting" of the fading sun before. Intriguing image.
ReplyDeleteScent of Autumn Wind
altho autumn is my favorite season, I felt a bit of sadness at the 'fadings'....you nailed the troika....
ReplyDeleteThank you for visits and comments! I was thinking how the days got shorter in autumn...which is sad for me. But I love the smell of wet leaves :)
ReplyDeleteenticing variety of images
ReplyDeleteCheers!
JzB