Carpe Diem Special #3
Chèvrefeuille's 'the cool rain'
scorched cherry blossoms
shadowy clouds creep softly
breeze brings the cool rain
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pigeons coo softly
fluttering in cherry tree
blossoms raining down
Cherry blossom rain is beautiful indeed!
ReplyDeleteThank you...prefer cherry blossom rain to wet rain ;-O
DeleteI love to listen to the coos of pigeons. I had tried to revisit you before and the link on my blog only took me to google+. Sorry. I never intended to not visit back, but could not find you.
ReplyDeleteProbably when I was revising to add cooing pigeons. Thanks for coming back!
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ReplyDeleteScorched blossoms...how sad...
ReplyDeleteCooling Raindrops
It is. It hurt to write it. Was trying to keep in line with others' posts focused on cherry blossoms and cooing.
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ReplyDeleteI can see the pigeons fluttering in the cherry trees and beating down the blossoms with their wings.
ReplyDeleteEnough Showers
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DeleteAwesome haiku you have written inspired by the one I gave.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much, Kristjaan!
Deletei love both haiku.. while the other has a hint of sadness, the other is an image of sheer joy :)
ReplyDeleteBoth wonderful. Love the image of cherry blossom rain.
ReplyDeleteJust lovely and the bliss of cherry trees is always to short.
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