Monday, April 22, 2013

Raining Down

Carpe Diem Special #3
Chèvrefeuille's 'the cool rain'


scorched cherry blossoms
shadowy clouds creep softly
breeze brings the cool rain

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pigeons coo softly
fluttering in cherry tree 
blossoms raining down
 

 

15 comments:

  1. Cherry blossom rain is beautiful indeed!

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    1. Thank you...prefer cherry blossom rain to wet rain ;-O

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  2. I love to listen to the coos of pigeons. I had tried to revisit you before and the link on my blog only took me to google+. Sorry. I never intended to not visit back, but could not find you.

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    1. Probably when I was revising to add cooing pigeons. Thanks for coming back!

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    1. It is. It hurt to write it. Was trying to keep in line with others' posts focused on cherry blossoms and cooing.

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  5. I can see the pigeons fluttering in the cherry trees and beating down the blossoms with their wings.

    Enough Showers

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  6. Awesome haiku you have written inspired by the one I gave.

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    1. Thank you so much, Kristjaan!

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  7. i love both haiku.. while the other has a hint of sadness, the other is an image of sheer joy :)

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  8. Both wonderful. Love the image of cherry blossom rain.

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  9. Just lovely and the bliss of cherry trees is always to short.

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