Friday, April 12, 2013

Sea Goat

Carpe Diem #169 (Capricorn)


unwavering en route
taking winter cold
to the water's edge

not easy to love
hard shelled crabs
have lonely hearts

5 comments:

  1. i like the first one

    second is sad

    Cheers!
    JzB

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    1. I do sad well... :( I need two fictional cute characters to write about. Like bunny and chipmunk.

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  2. But soft shell crabs make lovely sushi...count one's blessings :)

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  3. I like what you did with the sea of stars (to the edge)

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    1. I like your term "sea of stars" instead of my first line. Brava for you! Was trying to be too Capricorn and lost sight of my original comments that it's about the stars. Thanks for stopping by.

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