I love both verses, but the first haiku/senryu is the strongest of both. In that one I can sense a very deep spiritual layer. Seeking for Wisdom deep down inside my heart, soul and mind. Thank you for sharing.
Kristjaan, I so appreciate your comments. The first haiku came easily. I wanted to do two though and really had to "work" on the second. Next time, I'll know not to do one if it's not "flowing".
well penned and very thought provoking ~ ^_^
ReplyDeleteI love both verses, but the first haiku/senryu is the strongest of both. In that one I can sense a very deep spiritual layer. Seeking for Wisdom deep down inside my heart, soul and mind. Thank you for sharing.
ReplyDeleteKristjaan, I so appreciate your comments. The first haiku came easily. I wanted to do two though and really had to "work" on the second. Next time, I'll know not to do one if it's not "flowing".
DeleteIf one is shot in the head, does that release knowledge? (being silly)
ReplyDeleteBullseye my friend :)
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