Thursday, April 11, 2013

Path to Winter

Carpe Diem #168 (Sagittarius)


wisdom in mind's eye
focus on target
release knowledge

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follow path to winter
knowing where hazards lie
focus to survive

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5 comments:

  1. well penned and very thought provoking ~ ^_^

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  2. I love both verses, but the first haiku/senryu is the strongest of both. In that one I can sense a very deep spiritual layer. Seeking for Wisdom deep down inside my heart, soul and mind. Thank you for sharing.

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    1. Kristjaan, I so appreciate your comments. The first haiku came easily. I wanted to do two though and really had to "work" on the second. Next time, I'll know not to do one if it's not "flowing".

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  3. If one is shot in the head, does that release knowledge? (being silly)

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