Easing my way back into writing with mindfulness, introspection, and writing challenges.
I'm feeling rather like dust these days. Maybe if I'd just follow the sun?Cactus Shadows/Sun
Dust is good. Puts your message out there...think positive thoughts and intentions.
WOW! What can I say ... Maggie this is a masterpiece ... I am in awe. Thank you for sharing this strong and spiritual haiku with us here.
Am so happy you like it, Kristjaan. What I have believed for about 10 years but experienced last week. Synchronicity that tour tarot journey crossed over with mine.
Perfect both :)
I agree with WOW!!! These are perfection and power. Best haiku I've seen.
Thank you, Tiger and Sam! Waking up to these comments really making my day start off with big smiles.
These remind me of what Carl Sagan used to say on his show "Cosmos." He said "We are star stuff."Lovely haiku.
Ooh I like that..."star stuff". Thank you!
I feel like cosmic dust most mornings. This is a good feeling. I enjoyed this poem very much. :-)
Thank you, Alice!
Lovely haiku... stardust is great.
We are all stardust. Earth was created when a star burst...or something like that...the scientific version which I know you go with ;-O
Love that first one especially Grace...Bravo :)The Sun
Thank you, jrb! It's what I believe :))
I'm feeling rather like dust these days. Maybe if I'd just follow the sun?
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Dust is good. Puts your message out there...think positive thoughts and intentions.
DeleteWOW! What can I say ... Maggie this is a masterpiece ... I am in awe. Thank you for sharing this strong and spiritual haiku with us here.
ReplyDeleteAm so happy you like it, Kristjaan. What I have believed for about 10 years but experienced last week. Synchronicity that tour tarot journey crossed over with mine.
DeletePerfect both :)
ReplyDeleteI agree with WOW!!! These are perfection and power. Best haiku I've seen.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Tiger and Sam! Waking up to these comments really making my day start off with big smiles.
ReplyDeleteThese remind me of what Carl Sagan used to say on his show "Cosmos."
ReplyDeleteHe said "We are star stuff."
Lovely haiku.
Ooh I like that..."star stuff". Thank you!
DeleteI feel like cosmic dust most mornings. This is a good feeling. I enjoyed this poem very much. :-)
ReplyDeleteThank you, Alice!
DeleteLovely haiku... stardust is great.
ReplyDeleteWe are all stardust. Earth was created when a star burst...or something like that...the scientific version which I know you go with ;-O
DeleteLove that first one especially Grace...Bravo :)
ReplyDeleteThe Sun
Thank you, jrb! It's what I believe :))
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