Tuesday, May 21, 2013

HH: Human Life

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human betrayal
with fierce demonic-like strength
tornado murders



some wombs hold danger
egg has no choice to have life
born into evil



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17 comments:

  1. Anonymous5/21/2013 8:04 PM

    Yes, demon-like is a good description for the tornadoes. Such tragedy!Betrayal

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  2. Jenny5/21/2013 9:03 PM

    What appropriate reading on this sad day.

    Your words were quite powerful.

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  3. Maggie Grace5/21/2013 9:41 PM

    Thank you, Wabi and Jenny for reading and commenting. It is sad.

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  4. Anonymous5/21/2013 10:56 PM

    Wow - really strong haikus both of them :-)

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  5. Judith Westerfield5/21/2013 11:18 PM

    Powerful images both in picture and words.

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  6. rallentanda5/21/2013 11:38 PM

    The second one is chilling because it is true.

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    1. Maggie Grace5/21/2013 11:54 PM

      Thank you for saying so. That is most chilling to me too.

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  7. Siggi in Downeast Maine5/22/2013 12:48 AM

    Intense...the second one...WoW...but true...I never thought of it exactly like that before...Thank you.
    Peace
    Siggi

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  8. Unknown5/22/2013 4:34 AM

    Hello Maggie. Superb Haiku. The first one is scary. Loved it.

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  9. Anonymous5/22/2013 5:50 AM

    Wow these both very intense and brilliant!

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  10. Amrit Sinha5/22/2013 6:49 AM

    Nature's wrath can be tough to face !!!

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  11. Richa Singh5/22/2013 9:32 AM

    its the second haiku that leaves you with so much wonder and amazement.... lovely words and a great take!

    Richa

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  12. Maggie Grace5/22/2013 12:04 PM

    Thanks to all who commented while I slept. Both felt intense to me and appreciate the feedback!

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  13. KISLAYA GOPAL5/23/2013 12:43 AM

    Nicely done, your haiku has deep meaning, and the second one, I liked more.

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  14. Nanka5/23/2013 5:49 AM

    Demonic is the perfect word for betrayal!! One can feel the power and thunder in your Haiku expressions today!!

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