Easing my way back into writing with mindfulness, introspection, and writing challenges.
Yes, demon-like is a good description for the tornadoes. Such tragedy!Betrayal
What appropriate reading on this sad day.Your words were quite powerful.
Thank you, Wabi and Jenny for reading and commenting. It is sad.
Wow - really strong haikus both of them :-)
Powerful images both in picture and words.
Thank you, Judith!
The second one is chilling because it is true.
Thank you for saying so. That is most chilling to me too.
Intense...the second one...WoW...but true...I never thought of it exactly like that before...Thank you.PeaceSiggi
Hello Maggie. Superb Haiku. The first one is scary. Loved it.
Wow these both very intense and brilliant!
Nature's wrath can be tough to face !!!
its the second haiku that leaves you with so much wonder and amazement.... lovely words and a great take! Richa
Thanks to all who commented while I slept. Both felt intense to me and appreciate the feedback!
Nicely done, your haiku has deep meaning, and the second one, I liked more.
Demonic is the perfect word for betrayal!! One can feel the power and thunder in your Haiku expressions today!!