Friday, May 10, 2013

Kyoshi Takahama's 'Spring Breeze!'

Carpe Diem Special #36


Write a haiku in the spirit of this one written by Kyoshi Takahama:

Spring breeze !
on the hill I firmly stand
with the great resolve


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 on red canyon's edge
ancient wisdom answers me
i embrace her will 

 

17 comments:

  1. Wonderful haiku Maggie, I can feel the deeper meaning in this one. A masterpiece. Capeau

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  2. Love the imagery of the canyon and the depth of 'ancient wisdom'. Well penned Maggie!

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  3. to the canyon's rim
    looking for wisdom's calm voice
    finding it within

    Lovely - hope your trip is fruitful!Trembling

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    1. I like your words better than mine! Thank you ♥

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  4. This is a wonderful, pensive haiku - really is a nice moment of therapy and meditation.

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    1. Thank you. Am channeling something. Don't know what it means yet.

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  5. A great image to compliment wonderful words Grace.
    Perhaps I should say it's gorge-ous :)

    Spring Breeze

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    1. My first giggle of the day :)) Thank you for your lovely and clever comment!

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  6. beautiful, and yes - deep

    nicely done

    Cheers!
    JzB

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  7. Am glad the deep comes through. Thank you, JzB!

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  8. This says a lot between the words ... wonderfully conceived !!!

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  9. It's hard for me to embrace another's will...

    Standing Firm

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    1. I know I'm confusing but "her" will is also mine. Fragmented will becoming a single will...hopefully.

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  10. wonderful, I really feel for this one.

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    1. Soon to be at the canyon. Destiny awaits.

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