Carpe Diem Special #36
Write a haiku in the spirit of this one written by Kyoshi Takahama:
Spring breeze !
on the hill I firmly stand
with the great resolve
on the hill I firmly stand
with the great resolve
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on red canyon's edge
ancient wisdom answers me
i embrace her will
Wonderful haiku Maggie, I can feel the deeper meaning in this one. A masterpiece. Capeau
ReplyDeleteThanks so much, Kristjaan!
DeleteLove the imagery of the canyon and the depth of 'ancient wisdom'. Well penned Maggie!
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Deleteto the canyon's rim
ReplyDeletelooking for wisdom's calm voice
finding it within
Lovely - hope your trip is fruitful!Trembling
I like your words better than mine! Thank you ♥
DeleteThis is a wonderful, pensive haiku - really is a nice moment of therapy and meditation.
ReplyDeleteThank you. Am channeling something. Don't know what it means yet.
DeleteA great image to compliment wonderful words Grace.
ReplyDeletePerhaps I should say it's gorge-ous :)
Spring Breeze
My first giggle of the day :)) Thank you for your lovely and clever comment!
Deletebeautiful, and yes - deep
ReplyDeletenicely done
Cheers!
JzB
Am glad the deep comes through. Thank you, JzB!
ReplyDeleteThis says a lot between the words ... wonderfully conceived !!!
ReplyDeleteIt's hard for me to embrace another's will...
ReplyDeleteStanding Firm
I know I'm confusing but "her" will is also mine. Fragmented will becoming a single will...hopefully.
Deletewonderful, I really feel for this one.
ReplyDeleteSoon to be at the canyon. Destiny awaits.
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