Wednesday, May 8, 2013

Mind Storm

Sensational Haiku Wednesday (Storm)



stillness of the mind
storm clouds loom in the background
sleep becomes nightmare 

tension in the air
storm is brewing in the space
between you and me

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3 comments:

  1. Beautiful inner turmoil well put in words!! Oh! how it is brewing up meanly and destructively!!

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  2. I like how you used the prompt as a storm between people rather than the weather.

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  3. I love both of these they are absolutely perfect and deeply meaningful

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