Friday, September 27, 2013

CD: Jazzbumpa's "Cold Raindrops Falling"


Carpe Diem's Tan Renga Challenge #16



This week's first stanza of our Tan Renga is a haiku written by Jazzbumpa of Retirement Pastels. The goal for the challenge is to complete the Tan Renga by writing the second stanza (7-7 syllables). 








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green leaves turn orange
amid the colors we see
cold raindrops falling
(JzB)


abandoned nests rustling
in autumn's shivery breeze
(MG)


 

7 comments:

  1. Oh that end was just amazing.. the abandoned nest bring up such melancholy that fit excellent to the original haiku

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  2. Thank you, Bjorn. That means so much to me.

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  3. Melancholic completion Maggie ... a still life.

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  4. a cold reminder of the end at hand
    lovely Maggie

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  5. yes, that nails it down

    "autumn's shivery breeze"
    i love that line

    Cheers!
    JzB

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