Carpe Diem's Tan Renga Challenge #16
This week's first stanza of our Tan Renga is a haiku written by Jazzbumpa of Retirement Pastels. The goal for the challenge is to complete the Tan Renga by writing the second stanza (7-7 syllables).
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green leaves turn orange
amid the colors we see
cold raindrops falling
amid the colors we see
cold raindrops falling
(JzB)
abandoned nests rustling
in autumn's shivery breeze
(MG)
Oh that end was just amazing.. the abandoned nest bring up such melancholy that fit excellent to the original haiku
ReplyDeleteThank you, Bjorn. That means so much to me.
ReplyDeleteOh yes, everyone has gone....
ReplyDeleteMelancholic completion Maggie ... a still life.
ReplyDeletea cold reminder of the end at hand
ReplyDeletelovely Maggie
yes, that nails it down
ReplyDelete"autumn's shivery breeze"
i love that line
Cheers!
JzB
Great imagery!! Bravo!!
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