Easing my way back into writing with mindfulness, introspection, and writing challenges.
oh, yum, the sweet fragrance of peaches! love this haiku because of its senses so familiar to me.
How delightful. I never thought about it that way.
Peaches are good fertilizer, but I'd rather eat them!
What a waste... but maybe:wasted peachesbut yet the juicy flesh- is fieldmouse bliss
Yes, that's what I thought. Two once lovely peaches on the ground. That's why I used photo of squirrel. Something will enjoy it :)
this is just beautiful, Maggie. The 3rd line brings it home. YES!
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Beautiful take on the theme peach:-) Well done!
Wow! A beauty ... thanks Maggie.
Sweet and so real,love it:-)
oh, yum, the sweet fragrance of peaches! love this haiku because of its senses so familiar to me.
ReplyDeleteHow delightful. I never thought about it that way.
ReplyDeletePeaches are good fertilizer, but I'd rather eat them!
ReplyDeleteWhat a waste... but maybe:
ReplyDeletewasted peaches
but yet the juicy flesh
- is fieldmouse bliss
Yes, that's what I thought. Two once lovely peaches on the ground. That's why I used photo of squirrel. Something will enjoy it :)
Deletethis is just beautiful, Maggie. The 3rd line brings it home. YES!
ReplyDelete:))
DeleteBeautiful take on the theme peach:-) Well done!
DeleteWow! A beauty ... thanks Maggie.
ReplyDeleteSweet and so real,love it:-)
ReplyDelete