Sunday, September 15, 2013

CD: Southard's "The Cry of a Loon"

Carpe Diem Special #57






Write an all new haiku inspired by the following one by Southard and try to write in the same tone, sense and spirit:


across the still lake
through up curls of morning mist -
the cry of a loon


My inspired haiku: 




in the still of night

through creeping fog of the swamp

the howl of a wolf


 

4 comments:

  1. I can see the same kind of wilderness in the howl from the wolf and a call from the loon... beautiful serenade..

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  2. Oh, my! I wrote about wolves too--without having read yours first. Creative minds work in strange ways, don't they? ;)

    Frightened Loon

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  3. an eerie sound,,,nice one

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  4. it doesn't need to be about a loon

    you have nicely captured the same mood

    Cheers!
    JzB

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