Easing my way back into writing with mindfulness, introspection, and writing challenges.
Very nicely crafted haiku Maggie.
to watch the light of your light passthat would probably pull my moon out of gravity...
I know. I keep telling my husband he has to die after me. Really.
Wonderful to use that old song and turning it joyous beat to something so sad... very good.
Thanks, Bjorn...god of dark writing. Am glad it's not true. Have no idea why that's what came up though.
Watching one's beloved in the last moments of life is, indeed, earth shattering. Your poem is filled with a deep sadness.
Emotional writing... well-crafted haiku.
I'm all for borrowing bits and pieces of other works for haiku, as you know! Well done!Eclipse Their Beauty
Sad and lovely at the same time.
A total eclipse indeed :)
i like that sad touch......nicely done..
oh, Lord, I feel this one...
powerful and speaks so creatively of losing a loved one ~ well penned ~ carol ^_^