Wednesday, September 4, 2013

CD: Dark Skies

Carpe Diem ~ First Storm





 
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daylight becomes dark
as wind whips into fury ~
the first storm

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branches lash against
window panes in darkened day ~
the first storm



 

9 comments:

  1. i love a good storm....so much power i am left with awe...and we have had some tremndous storms this summer...i could do without falling branches and trees though...smiles.

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  2. This sounds like the first hurricane! you've described a dark and threatening storm so vividly!

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  3. The whipping, furious wind--I'm acquainted with that, even here in the desert!

    First Storm

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  4. great descriptions
    that is how it goes

    Cheers!
    JzB

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  5. You've captured the feeling of the first storm well here Grace!

    the city blushes

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  6. sounds like our first storms this year
    nicely described

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  7. Branches clattering against windowpanes can be a pain! ;)

    Fall’s First Storm

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  8. Love the imagery in that second haiku... still I'm glad it's not time yet

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  9. Awesome set Maggie ... so well written autumn story about the first storm in a few words. Well done, the first is my favorite a gem.

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