Carpe Diem ~ Rewrite This Haiku
arranging the plum-flowers,
I would enjoy them in the light of the lamp,
as if in the moonlight
(c) Taigi (1709-1771 ?)
My rewrite:
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no moonlight for vase
plum flowers bask beneath lamp
their beauty aglow
you take the light where you can get it eh? smiles.
ReplyDeleteBeautifully re-done haiku Maggie ... you did a great job on this new feature.
ReplyDeleteYou really capture the scene well
ReplyDeleteNice rewrite
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