Saturday, October 12, 2013

CD: Ikebana Plum Blossoms

Carpe Diem ~ Rewrite This Haiku





arranging the plum-flowers,
I would enjoy them in the light of the lamp,
as if in the moonlight

(c) Taigi (1709-1771 ?)



My rewrite:


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no moonlight for vase
plum flowers bask beneath lamp
their beauty aglow


 

5 comments:

  1. you take the light where you can get it eh? smiles.

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  2. Beautifully re-done haiku Maggie ... you did a great job on this new feature.

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  3. You really capture the scene well

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