Sunday, October 27, 2013

CD: Gary Gay's "Touched"

Carpe Diem Special #64






Write a haiku in the same tone, sense, and spirit as this one by Gary Gay.



touched
in the darkness--
by a snowflake

(c) Gary Gay



My inspired haiku:


lost
in the dark ~
your hand brushes mine

15 comments:

  1. oooohhhhh.....I know this feeling....

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  2. that can be a delight. smiles.

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  3. Nice romantic take on Garry's haiku Maggie ... very strong feeling in this one ... in touch with the original by Garry.

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  4. You've captured a sweet moment -at once sensuous and loving! ;)

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  5. loving haiku ~ feel the love ~ thanks, carol ^_^

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    1. When it's your spouse, you know ;-)

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  7. Oh so sweet.. very good.

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  8. reassurance of love - perfect

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  9. Ohh...this is so romantic!

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  10. Excellent! And quite to the point.
    Eliz

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