VisDare 13: Atmospheric
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Like Normandy, she thought. So many graves. The sadness she felt at the enormity of the loss. Only now the loss was her own. The heavy mist burying the moored boats; the lowering of the tiny casket into the ground. Surrounded by spirits of those who fought valiantly, as did her baby fight to live in the incubator. If only she'd been able to touch her before her death.
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A sad and very moving piece, Maggie. Very well written,I like the image you used as well. Somber and silent, the stakes like grave markers.
ReplyDeleteOh you did very well on the picture. Very very touching.....
ReplyDeleteThank you, Evi and Björn! Appreciate your time and comments!
ReplyDeleteMaggie ... I can only say how hauntingly raw and powerful this is. Excellent work.
ReplyDeleteGorgeous work. Somber and reflective. Welcome to the VisDare family!! You have a lovely writing voice and I hope to see more of you in the future. :)
ReplyDeleteThose first few lines are so deep and full of feeling love it
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