Easing my way back into writing with mindfulness, introspection, and writing challenges.
Absent is the best place for those cigarettes!! Bravo! Ascent
Cigarettes absent even when the smoke's ascent is so mesmerizing? Shows the determination of a person to stay away from 'em. As wabisabi said, absent is the best place for cigarettes. Very well written! :)And thank you for reading my haiku.
Hmmm...interesting response. I'm not a smoker and have no idea why smoke came into my mind. The ending seemed right for the haiku though. Must be something subconscious in my meaning. Thank you for your comments!
I love ur take on the prompt... different, interesting and with a good msg! Ascent to surface
Very beautiful...let the cigarettes end in smoke alone...it's better..RS
The words are sweet, although the cigarette smoke isn't! :)Ascent