Cigarettes absent even when the smoke's ascent is so mesmerizing? Shows the determination of a person to stay away from 'em. As wabisabi said, absent is the best place for cigarettes. Very well written! :) And thank you for reading my haiku.
Hmmm...interesting response. I'm not a smoker and have no idea why smoke came into my mind. The ending seemed right for the haiku though. Must be something subconscious in my meaning. Thank you for your comments!
Absent is the best place for those cigarettes!! Bravo!
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Cigarettes absent even when the smoke's ascent is so mesmerizing? Shows the determination of a person to stay away from 'em. As wabisabi said, absent is the best place for cigarettes. Very well written! :)
ReplyDeleteAnd thank you for reading my haiku.
Hmmm...interesting response. I'm not a smoker and have no idea why smoke came into my mind. The ending seemed right for the haiku though. Must be something subconscious in my meaning. Thank you for your comments!
ReplyDeleteI love ur take on the prompt... different, interesting and with a good msg!
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Very beautiful...let the cigarettes end in smoke alone...it's better..
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The words are sweet, although the cigarette smoke isn't! :)
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Brilliantly beautiful
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