Thursday, March 28, 2013

Days in the Sun

Carpe Diem #157 (Dandelion)


sun worshipers
folding inwards at night
fields of dandelions

fields of dandelions
once bright yellow
white snow in the wind

white snow in the wind
memories of days in the sun
future generations await   

 
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10 comments:

  1. Chèvrefeuille3/28/2013 10:59 PM

    WOW !!! Maggie this is a really nice cascading haiku on 'Dandelions', awesome just awesome. What can I say more? I am in awe.

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  2. Anonymous3/29/2013 4:02 AM

    What an excellent cascade Maggie I really enjoyed the story. I hesitate to say it, but done with such Grace :)

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  3. Anonymous3/29/2013 8:04 AM

    Wonderful set of cascading haiku with contemplative thoughts ~ ^_^

    Thanks for your comments.

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  4. Magical Mystical Teacher3/29/2013 8:10 AM

    Oh, indeed, these little golden globes are sun worshipers!

    Dandelion’s Fortitude

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  5. joanne3/29/2013 9:31 AM

    I love personification! ' white snow in the wind' is perfect....

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  6. brudberg3/29/2013 11:00 AM

    A really nice cycle of lift cascade. Very good :-)

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  7. Unknown3/29/2013 1:29 PM

    beautiful set, Maggie!

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  8. Maggie Grace3/29/2013 4:51 PM

    Thanks, everyone! Guess it's easier to write when I feel an emotion connection to it. This whole month has been beautiful prompts.

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    1. Mark3/30/2013 5:19 AM

      Some people get emotional in a good way about dandelions, and others, well...

      Dandelion Season

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  9. WabiSabi3/29/2013 5:22 PM

    I love the image of your sun worshippers folding up at night!

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