Wonderfully composed haiku on 'zodiac', thank you for sharing. That last line is really brilliant. At deep blue sky somewhere between the stars my zodiac is among them. Isn't it great to be part of the stars!
I honestly wasn't pleased with what I wrote yesterday but have a different perspective today. Everyone seems to read something different into it. I like what you wrote, Björn. "Future is here". Makes me ponder.
lovely haiku for zodiac ~ love the line...my zodiac among them ~ great photo also ^_^
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it truely is a beautiful line!
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ReplyDeletedo stars reveal their futures
by looking at us
Cheers!
JzB
By the time we see them, it's their very distant past :)
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Great lines there make a landmark haiku.
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ReplyDeleteMy zodiac among the cosmos- I loved it! Beautifully penned haiku:-)
ReplyDeleteLovely haiku and imagery Gracy.
ReplyDeleteWonderfully composed haiku on 'zodiac', thank you for sharing. That last line is really brilliant. At deep blue sky somewhere between the stars my zodiac is among them. Isn't it great to be part of the stars!
ReplyDeletei love the idea of stars gazing back at us ^^ well-penned
ReplyDeleteI woke up to all these lovely comments. Thank you so very much!
ReplyDeleteBy looking at stars
ReplyDeletereveal a distant past
future is here
I honestly wasn't pleased with what I wrote yesterday but have a different perspective today. Everyone seems to read something different into it. I like what you wrote, Björn. "Future is here". Makes me ponder.
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