Carpe Diem #148 (Green Barley)
spider web on barley sprouts
glistening morning dew ~
the sparkle in her eyes
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walk through barley field
wet hands
cleansed by morning dew
Photo source: http://chevrefeuillescarpediem.blogspot.com/2013/03/carpe-diem-148-aomugi-green-barley.html
oh, the sparkle!
ReplyDeleteThat sparkling in her eyes, really well written. I like the way how you have used our prompt for today and I am glad to see that your haiku are becoming stronger and more ... balanced.
ReplyDeleteThank you! Possibly subconscious balance. I still feel like it just comes out and it is what it is.
DeleteThere's something fresh and translucent about your lines...
ReplyDeleteBitter Barley Brew
What a lovely comment! Thank you :)
Deleteboth lovely ~ can feel the cleansing of morning dew ~ enjoy ^_^
ReplyDeletevery lovely...
ReplyDeleteThanks to all who stopped by today!
ReplyDeletelike the spring time walk through the fields so much nature to enjoy
ReplyDeleteWish it were that green and pretty here to do just that!
DeleteI really like that sparkle in her eyes. A wonderful ku... just perfect
ReplyDeleteThank you, Bjorn! That photo inspired me...that sparkling cobweb :)
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