Tuesday, March 19, 2013

Morning Dew

Carpe Diem #148 (Green Barley)


spider web on barley sprouts
glistening morning dew ~
the sparkle in her eyes

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walk through barley field
wet hands
cleansed by morning dew





Photo source: http://chevrefeuillescarpediem.blogspot.com/2013/03/carpe-diem-148-aomugi-green-barley.html

12 comments:

  1. That sparkling in her eyes, really well written. I like the way how you have used our prompt for today and I am glad to see that your haiku are becoming stronger and more ... balanced.

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    1. Thank you! Possibly subconscious balance. I still feel like it just comes out and it is what it is.

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  2. There's something fresh and translucent about your lines...

    Bitter Barley Brew

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    1. What a lovely comment! Thank you :)

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  3. both lovely ~ can feel the cleansing of morning dew ~ enjoy ^_^

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  4. Thanks to all who stopped by today!

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  5. like the spring time walk through the fields so much nature to enjoy

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    1. Wish it were that green and pretty here to do just that!

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  6. I really like that sparkle in her eyes. A wonderful ku... just perfect

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    1. Thank you, Bjorn! That photo inspired me...that sparkling cobweb :)

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