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sad, If only one could help it!
I have to agree, there is something sad and mournful about this piece...
Thank you, Meenakshi and Mark, for visiting and commenting. I knew I wanted to transition from camellias dying in May to roses blooming in May. This is what came out of me. I felt sad too wondering where it originated.
On the other hand we would not savor the fleeting flowers so much if they bloomed all the time.
So true...with anything, eh? Thanks for commenting.
Makes me think he bought flowers but did not stick around long enough to see them bloom....nice...
Thank you for commenting. I like your interpretation!
Very sad story implied here, great haiku
Thank you. Seems that camellias bring sorrow to mind for many of us.
What I see in it is mourning a death.Hence the sadness.JzB
Yes, what I felt. I guess it is a good thing that the emotion flowed into the words. Thank you!
sad, If only one could help it!
ReplyDeleteI have to agree, there is something sad and mournful about this piece...
ReplyDeleteThank you, Meenakshi and Mark, for visiting and commenting. I knew I wanted to transition from camellias dying in May to roses blooming in May. This is what came out of me. I felt sad too wondering where it originated.
ReplyDeleteOn the other hand we would not savor the fleeting flowers so much if they bloomed all the time.
ReplyDeleteSo true...with anything, eh? Thanks for commenting.
DeleteMakes me think he bought flowers but did not stick around long enough to see them bloom....nice...
ReplyDeleteThank you for commenting. I like your interpretation!
DeleteVery sad story implied here, great haiku
ReplyDeleteThank you. Seems that camellias bring sorrow to mind for many of us.
DeleteWhat I see in it is mourning a death.
ReplyDeleteHence the sadness.
JzB
Yes, what I felt. I guess it is a good thing that the emotion flowed into the words. Thank you!
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