Monday, January 20, 2014

CD: Shattered Crystal

Carpe Diem Special #73

Alexey Andreyev's Fourth ~ "Day After Valentine's" 

 

day after Valentine's -
red petals on the floor, and
a broom in the corner


(c) Alexey Andreyev


Write a haiku in the same sense, tone, and spirit as the above.


My inspired haiku:

hanging crystal heart
no longer in the window
day after valentine's




8 comments:

  1. nice one ~ well penned for Carpe Diem ~ carol, xxx



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  2. You captured the ambiguity of the original! Well done!

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  3. ouch.
    to both of them.

    its what happens when we relegate it to a day eh?

    i answered your question...i think click would be fine...

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  4. I like to think it is because there was a trail of roses leading to romance..

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  5. There's more than a little sadness in this glimpse of a love that seems to have vanished...

    Valentine’s #1 and Valentine’s #2

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  6. Love disappeared just into the sky ...

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  7. aw, I'd have kept it there forever!

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