Wednesday, January 1, 2014

CD: Siberian Love

Carpe Diem #364

 

Yaroslavsky Terminal Moscow

 

 

across siberia
two lovers reunite
violin sings softly

***

train rumbles across
harsh siberian terrain
lovers find each other


Posted by at
Labels: , , , , ,

8 comments:

  1. Brian Miller1/01/2014 10:47 PM

    nice...i like the use of the music as the closing line in the first one...
    plays well with the second where the sound is in the first line...

    happy new year...smiles...

    ReplyDelete
  2. Chèvrefeuille1/01/2014 11:59 PM

    That first haiku is my favorite Maggie ... in that verse you have told the whole story of "Aleph" ... very well done.

    ReplyDelete
  3. Magical Mystical Teacher1/02/2014 8:51 AM

    Finding each other is one of the most exciting adventures in the world!

    ReplyDelete
  4. Pealogic1/02/2014 11:27 AM

    Two really brilliant haiku one a little harsher than the other. I imagine the second is, in its tone, more resembling the environment.
    Ciao
    Pea

    ReplyDelete
  5. brudberg1/02/2014 1:53 PM

    You take my mind on that trip... it works so great when you write it...

    ReplyDelete
  6. Jazzbumpa1/02/2014 2:30 PM

    in string and rail songs
    old love springing up anew
    what could be better

    Cheers!
    JzB

    ReplyDelete
  7. Anonymous1/02/2014 6:50 PM

    Nicely done on this haiku and I also like JzB's reply

    ReplyDelete
  8. Anonymous1/03/2014 11:31 PM

    That first one sings!

    ReplyDelete

Subscribe to: Post Comments (Atom)