Easing my way back into writing with mindfulness, introspection, and writing challenges.
nice...i like the use of the music as the closing line in the first one...plays well with the second where the sound is in the first line...happy new year...smiles...
That first haiku is my favorite Maggie ... in that verse you have told the whole story of "Aleph" ... very well done.
Finding each other is one of the most exciting adventures in the world!
Two really brilliant haiku one a little harsher than the other. I imagine the second is, in its tone, more resembling the environment. CiaoPea
You take my mind on that trip... it works so great when you write it...
in string and rail songsold love springing up anewwhat could be betterCheers!JzB
Nicely done on this haiku and I also like JzB's reply
That first one sings!