Thursday, January 16, 2014

CD: Past Tense

Carpe Diem ~ Yenisei River



fire to ice
lives pass between
arctic thaw 

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if past life exists
i must have sinned horribly
no future life desired


6 comments:

  1. ha. i hear you on the second,
    hey i dont want another round on the ferris wheel
    and i dont know that i believe in generational
    sin like that...

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  2. great sharing your thoughts; have a nice Friday

    much love...

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  3. What a wonderful response on our todays post.

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  4. I really like this - especially the second one. But it's a marathon, not a sprint :)

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  5. Agonized over last line. It is meant to be a metaphor for forgiveness. *forgiving thaw*. FWIW.

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  6. Love these Maggie. I get the second one.

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