Wednesday, November 6, 2013

CD: Eucalyptus Down Under

Carpe Diem ~ Tan Renga Challenge




Complete the haiku with two seven syllable lines to create a tanka.


the eucalyptus
captures the iridescence
in the morning fog


(c) Steph


koala bear savors the leaves
breathes penetrating fragrance



13 comments:

  1. ha. i have never thought of a koala's breath....they are cute though...smiles.

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  2. yes it is a penetrating scent, and a good one

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  3. The scent seems to be a recurring theme! I love the idea of the koala having a nice breath!

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  4. That's why koalas don't catch colds ... I like this completion ... the humor in it is awesome.

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  5. I like the direction and the last line!

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  6. Ah, we don't have Koala Bears...but look out for the Drop Bears!

    The Eucalyptus

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  7. great finish. it's fun to see how someone can add to another's thoughts.

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  9. Yes,they know about the good stuff:-)Love this one Maggie:-)

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  10. Have you seen this guy?
    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=x8oLu7znwQ0

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    1. Koala fight! lol. Only think of them as being so docile.

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