Wednesday, February 5, 2014

VisDare: Show Time

VisDare: Contemplating

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alone in a crowd
drifting into the zone
on stage in her mind


  1. the first line, so true, you can be alone in the crowd
    i feel by the end she is wishing perhaps she could be free
    enough to be on stage...or that maybe she feels everyone is looking at her

  2. You have capture loneliness as it often feels.. alone yet with a burning visibility...

  3. This is a lovely haiku. I feel sadness, self consciousness, and a desire to be recognized. A lot of emotions is so few words.

  4. …and this is why I love poetry. So much communicated in this one hiaku. You captured her attitude perfectly, I think.