Easing my way back into writing with mindfulness, introspection, and writing challenges.
the first line, so true, you can be alone in the crowdi feel by the end she is wishing perhaps she could be freeenough to be on stage...or that maybe she feels everyone is looking at her
You have capture loneliness as it often feels.. alone yet with a burning visibility...
This is a lovely haiku. I feel sadness, self consciousness, and a desire to be recognized. A lot of emotions is so few words.
…and this is why I love poetry. So much communicated in this one hiaku. You captured her attitude perfectly, I think.